editing changes - adding pace

We have been given feedback about our piece so far and have decided that we need to add more pace to the anger sequence in which he destroys his belongings. In order to do so we felt we should speed up the cutting within the sequence and shoot more shots of his rage in order to give a stronger impression of his state of mind. Fitting into the genre is also very important of course, however, we need to make sure the pace of this sequence fits with the music's emotional tone, as this is the climactic point of the song with the strongest vocal elements. Another idea we have had is to include cuts of his girlfriend to add a deeper emotional depth to entire piece, while also adding pace. However, we do need to shoot these sections first, as these are the final part and have not been finished.